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Across our country a waive of change is occurring in how we purchase electricity. The PPC would like to invite you to join us and promote this innovative idea for change here locally. Our current laws allows for this competitive change and cooperation between utilities. We need your help to influence those that want the public right of ways used for monopolistic and for profit purposes to the exclusion of others. We believe that the power lines in our community should be open and accessible by qualified utilities such as the Public Power Cooperative. Business and residential communities want a choice and we do not want to be forced into duplication of services! Duplications hurt us.

A wave of change is transforming the electric power industry nationwide. The County Public Power Cooperative invites you to join us in promoting these innovative changes locally. Our current laws allow this competitive shift and cooperation between utilities. We need your help to challenge the existing practice of reserving public right-of-ways for private-profit monopolies, to the exclusion of others. We believe the power lines in our community should be open and accessible to qualified utilities like the PPC.

Business and residential communities want a choice, and we do not want to be forced into duplication of services! Duplication hurts all of us.

Without even touching our Chino shirt, its carefree colors give a pretty good clue you’re in for something special. And considering that we cut our Chino Shirt full, it’s reassuring to know it won’t lose it’s fit in the laundry.

Even before you touch its supple fabric, our Chino Shirt’s carefree colors offer a pretty good clue you’re in for something special. And since we give our Chino Shirt a full cut, you can be sure it won’t lose its fit in the laundry.

The Whatcom Country Medical society, which eight physicians in 1889 now has more than 225 members. It’s major function is to promote medical education, ethics and pubic health.

The Whatcom County Medical Society, founded by eight physicians in 1889, now has more than 225 members. Its primary purpose is to promote medical education, ethics, and public health.

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